Wednesday, 26 May 2010
Introduction
The arguments for against drugs, the user of drugs say, drugs are good for their body. (10 reasons why) There are issues in the statement to be cover. Why drugs are bad for our (human) bodies. Three key arguments will be stated why drugs are not good and healthy for the bodies. The three key points are going to be reviews are the body, how drugs affect the body parts. Mind, how drugs change the way user think. And lastly, life, how drugs destroy a person’s life. All three key points are going to be discuss in order.
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The introduction is clear except for some grammar problems:
ReplyDelete“The three key points are going to be reviews are the body,...” What does this mean ???
Try to write in complete sentences for example:
“Next the mind will be looked at and how drugs affect the way people think.”